just personal advice: The smartphone plays an important role in our lives (“major sounds exaggerating” Not restricted to calling and… The smart phone has become… Television programs Play games Gain better understanding I think you should focus on developing your ideas rather than just listing the benefits of using a smartphone. Furthermore, do not use “firstly, secondly,…”
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just personal advice:
The smartphone plays an important role in our lives (“major sounds exaggerating”
Not restricted to calling and…
The smart phone has become…
Television programs
Play games
Gain better understanding
I think you should focus on developing your ideas rather than just listing the benefits of using a smartphone. Furthermore, do not use