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Phuongthao1406 Posted 9 years ago
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[What are the benefits of household chores?] that is my writing, I'll be very thankful if you correct it.

Nowadays, with the development of technology, many machines have been invented to help people be more free, they don’t have to do the easiest work such as household chores. However, I think when everyone in the family does the housework together, it’s more beneficial.

Firstly, there’s an enormous benefits that come to a family when husbands and children contribute to household chores. It’s helps to educate the children, because of the fact that the children who do the housework tend to be more mature and active. They deeply sympathize with their parents and become a self-made person. Besides, the husbands who share the housework are often on good terms with their wives. Women often feel happy when they see their husbands doing housework. Therefore, the rating of divorce decreases.

Secondly, it’s very economical when we do household chores. In stead of spending an enormous amount of money in buying processed food, paying for laundry,... we can save money and have a wonderful trip.

To conclusion, we should do household chores willingly due to its benefits.

  
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