We have used 3,9 million tons plastic in 2017. That’s about 41kh per person every year. Plastic is big dangerous to our enviroment. It kills marine animals or make them become deformation because of not plastic’s decomposition. So, we must decrease amount of plastic we use to protect our ocean, our enviroment and our life.
First, I think Government should invest to scientist or student in University to develop new material that good for our enviroment. We use it instead of plastic. Before finding new ones, we can use different material which can reuse or recycle. For example, we can use glass box instead of plastic box. We can use canvas bag instead of plastic bag. Beside that, I think Government can use high tax with plastic product. Encouraging produce enviromentally friendly by decrease tax or use 0% tax in 5 or 10 years.
Second, to reduce plastic I think supplier should stop offering plastic bag for customer. They can talk about sale for custumer who use their canvas bags. It’s will encorage consumers use enviromentally friendly product. Moreover, business should replace plastic by different material with their product. Maybe it can make high cos but it’s help that business have a good eye with their customers.
Last but not at least, each man can reduce plastic by himself. You can say no to plastic straw or plastic bottle, plastic glass in a coffee. You should bring glass bottle and don’t buy plastic bottle. You can bring glass box and canvas bag when you go out to buy something.
In conclusion, we have many ways to reduce plastic. Maybe, we must spend more money to use friendly product than plastic. But we don’t need spend more money to improve our eviroment, our healthy when we stop using plastic.
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We have used (use the simple past when you give a specific time.) 3,9 million tons plastic in 2017. That’s about 41kh (spacing problem. Also, I do not recognize the units "kh.") per per