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Angliholic Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
What a beneficial parasol you are
Dark Cloud
What a beneficial parasol you are
in a scorching hot summer!
You fight off all the malicious sunlight
for elegant young ladies in bright daylight.
They are like buttercups swaying and dancing
to the melody of summer breeze you bring.
Following your footstep, the misty rain
Falls like a fine gentle hand
That caresses each flower bud on a green land.
Hi,
I dashed off the above when it's cloudy and drizzling this morning in my part of the world. Is it right to write " a beneficial parasol" and " the malicious sunlight?"
I wrote them this way on purpose, for people always think that dark cloud is bad while sunlight is delightful.
What a beneficial parasol you are
in a scorching hot summer!
You fight off all the malicious sunlight
for elegant young ladies in bright daylight.
They are like buttercups swaying and dancing
to the melody of summer breeze you bring.
Following your footstep, the misty rain
Falls like a fine gentle hand
That caresses each flower bud on a green land.
Hi,
I dashed off the above when it's cloudy and drizzling this morning in my part of the world. Is it right to write " a beneficial parasol" and " the malicious sunlight?"
I wrote them this way on purpose, for people always think that dark cloud is bad while sunlight is delightful.
Top answer
These expressions are OK to my ear in this poetic context. )
- These expressions are OK to my ear in this poetic context.
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These expressions are OK to my ear in this poetic context. (Of course, if you started talking in this way in everyday conversation then you'd probably get some funny looks!)
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I think the idea is good, and the rhythm and image of 'beneficial parasol' is outstanding. Some suggestions for directions in which to go:
What a beneficial parasol you are
in scorching summer!
You fend off the malicious sunlight
for elegant young ladies,
Like buttercups swaying and dancing
to t
What a beneficial parasol you are
in scorching summer!
You fend off the malicious sunlight
for elegant young ladies,
Like buttercups swaying and dancing
to t
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