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BW2/3 Posted 19 years ago
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0John had a hangover last night. Then he went to the urgent care at the hospital. The clerk registered him at the front desk and asked him to fill out the form. Then the nurse came and took him to the room. In a minute the doctor with a long hair in the back but bold in the front examined him. John told him he had a big headache and scared. After a while the doctor fixed him. Then an administrator came into the room and asked John to join the study she gave. She told his medical information was confidential. But John wasn't thinking that, he wanted to get her number. John hesitated to participate. However, Jane looked kind of attractive. John decided to do it. After half hour, he finished his participating. He was about to leave and then asked if she wa available. Jane answered her she had a sweet boyfriend loudly. John told her to be quite and felt embarrassed, walking out the room. 02br
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02br 02br 00Plese review articles, and how to join your short sentences, often with words like 'so' and 'because'. 02br 02br 01font 00John had a hangover last night. He went to the emergency department at the hospital.

— Clive

  • 02br 02br 00Plese review articles, and how to join your short sentences, often with words like 'so' and 'because'.
  • 02br 02br 01font 00John had a hangover last night.
  • He went to the emergency department at the hospital.
  • The clerk registered him at the front desk and asked him to fill out a form.
  • Then a nurse came and took him to a room.
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00Plese review articles, and how to join your short sentences, often with words like 'so' and 'because'. 02br
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