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Lpardo Posted 16 years ago
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Veronica just called me. She wants to know if you could give me or mail her vacations pay stub.
Also, she believes she left behind some of her belongings. If possible, she would like me to get them with some books' samples.
Thanks!
  

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"Get them with some books' samples" makes no sense to me. The choice between mailing the stub and giving it to me is fairely complex. You need to slow down and make it clear.

  • "Get them with some books' samples" makes no sense to me.
  • The choice between mailing the stub and giving it to me is fairely complex.
  • You need to slow down and make it clear.
  • ).
  • She wants to know if you could either give it to me, or mail it to her current address.
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"Get them with some books' samples" makes no sense to me.

The choice between mailing the stub and giving it to me is fairely complex. You need to slow down and make it clear.
She would like her vacations pay stub (whatever that is???). She wants to know if you could either give it to me, or mail it to her current address.

. . . she would like me to get them, al

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