Well structured paragraph

hey i have to write a well structured paragraph for english and im really not good at writing my assignment is ....to look at several clips on my class glog http://msmilenovic.edu.glogster.com/msmilenovics-eng1d-class/ then pic one that i enjoyed most and best relates to how i studied romeo and juliet all i have is, idont know why it came out like that i wrote it in paragraph form and copy and pasted it i tryed to fix it but i didnt work sorry about that but anyways i really need help

I think clip number one relates best to how I understood Romeo and Juliet.

 I see the story of Romeo and Juliet as two foolish children that would die to be together and don’t see how there actions affect everyone else. 

This clip shows the stupidity of this story It shows how Romeo loves Juliet and Juliet loves Romeo but they cant be together so Romeo kills his self

 when he thinks Juliet is dead because he just cant live without her and then Juliet kills her self  because Romeo is dead. In the end of this clip 

one of the characters said “kids” implying that kids do stupid things. I feel that this clip really shows how Romeo and Juliet do not see how their actions affect everyone else because as they are talking and killing there selves everyone

 is standing around them and watching but they completely ignore everything else and just do what they want.