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Good morning all,
You may be aware that our brother Mr Hassan Kamara's wife has given birth to a beautiful baby girl. Our usual tradition towards this cause is still unchange, and as a result we are kindly asking you to pay your £50 contribution to the following bank account before the end of this month.
We hope and pray that the almighty God will reward you and your family abundantly.
We thank you in advance for your usual contribution.
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Goldenboy1 Do you think the sentences are well structured? Yes. I'd make only a few changes.
- Goldenboy1 Do you think the sentences are well structured?
- Yes.
- I'd make only a few changes.
- I think you mean 'colleague' rather than 'brother', but if 'brother' is traditional in your group, then leave it as is.
- You may be aware that our colleague Mr Hassan Kamara's wife has given birth to a beautiful baby girl.
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Goldenboy1Do you think the sentences are well structured?
Yes. I'd make only a few changes.
I think you mean 'colleague' rather than 'brother', but if 'brother' is traditional in your group, then leave it as is.
You may be aware that our colleague Mr Hassan Kamara's wife has given birth to a beautiful baby girl. Our
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