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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Well-keeping

Please check out the following sentences.

(1) To defy the chilly weather , I want to buy some warm clothes to keep out the cold.

(2) To resist the chilly weather, I plan to buy some warm well-keeping clothes.

(3) However, I'm hesitating about whether I should buy a down coat or a fleece one.
  

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contiluo (1) To defy the chilly weather , I want to buy some warm clothes to keep out the cold. (2) To resist the chilly weather, I plan to buy some warm well-keeping clothes. (3) However, I'm hesitating about whether I should buy a down coat or a fleece one.

  • contiluo (1) To defy the chilly weather , I want to buy some warm clothes to keep out the cold.
  • (2) To resist the chilly weather, I plan to buy some warm well-keeping clothes.
  • (3) However, I'm hesitating about whether I should buy a down coat or a fleece one.
  • I'll leave the rewrites to someone else.
  • #3 is not bad!
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contiluo(1) To defy the chilly weather , I want to buy some warm clothes to keep out the cold.
(2) To resist the chilly weather, I plan to buy some warm well-keeping clothes.

(3) However, I'm hesitating about whether I should buy a down coat or a fleece one.
I'll leave the rewrites to someone else.

#3 is not bad!
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