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Jackson6612 Posted 18 years ago
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Well, gentlemen, each one of you has a lot of energy to...

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Well, gentlemen, each one of you has a lot of energy to make this world a much better place to live. You just have to harness that energy out of you. See, you can harness the energy of calmly running water into electricity and irrigation. Utilize your potential.
  

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Well, gentlemen, each one of you has the energy to make this world a much better place to live in ( or in which to live) . You just have to harness that e nergy, as we can harness the energy of calmly running water and convert it into electricity or for irrigation. Realize your potential.

— Mister Micawber

  • Well, gentlemen, each one of you has the energy to make this world a much better place to live in ( or in which to live) .
  • You just have to harness that e nergy, as we can harness the energy of calmly running water and convert it into electricity or for irrigation.
  • Realize your potential.
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Well, gentlemen, each one of you has the energy to make this world a much better place to live in (or in which to live). You just have to harness that energy, as we can harness the energy of calmly running water and convert it into electricity or for irrigation. Realize your potential.
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