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Goldenboy1 Posted 7 years ago
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Are the following sentences well constructed? If no, please tell me how I can improve them?

I believe that the leak is coming from above. I do not know if it is our responsibility to arrange access to those flats so that we can conduct a trace and access. Please advise

  

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I believe the leak is coming from above. I do not know whose responsibility it is to arrange access to those flats so that we can conduct a trace and access. Please advise me on this matter.

  • I believe the leak is coming from above.
  • I do not know whose responsibility it is to arrange access to those flats so that we can conduct a trace and access.
  • Please advise me on this matter.
  • I don't like "access" twice in the sentence.
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I believe the leak is coming from above. I do not know whose responsibility it is to arrange access to those flats so that we can conduct a trace and access. Please advise me on this matter.


I don't like "access" twice in the sentence.

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