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Tuongvan Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

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Dear teachers,
Coild you please edit my sentence below if there is anything wrong with grammar or the use of words?:

A/ Since/as /because the president of the ABC corporation, Japan is visiting his company tomorrow , the director asked his employees to hang a welcoming banderole/banner in front of the company with a line of words " Warmly welcome the president of the ABC corporation, Japan "

B/ Since /as /because my exam is in two weeks now, I must study harder or else I won't be able to do it well /do well on it.

Thank you in advance
  

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A/ Since the president of the ABC corporation, Japan , is visiting the company us tomorrow , the director asked the employees to hang a welcoming banner in front of the company with the words " We warmly welcome the president of the ABC corporation, Japan " B/ Because my exam is two weeks from now, I must study harder or else I won't be able to do well on it.

  • A/ Since the president of the ABC corporation, Japan , is visiting the company us tomorrow , the director asked the employees to hang a welcoming banner in front of the company with the words " We warmly welcome the president of the ABC corporation, Japan " B/ Because my exam is two weeks from now, I must study harder or else I won't be able to do well on it.
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A/ Since the president of the ABC corporation, Japan, is visiting the company us tomorrow , the director asked the employees to hang a welcoming banner in front of the company with the words " We warmly welcome the president of the ABC corporation, Japan "

B/ Because my exam is two weeks from now, I must study harder or else I won't be able to do well on it.
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Hi,
A/ Since/as /because the President of ABC Corporation, Japan, is visiting tomorrow, the company director has asked his employees to hang out a welcoming banner that said, "We warmly welcome the President of ABC Corporation, Japan".

B/ Since /as /because my exam is in two weeks, I must study harder. (or else I won't be able to do well on it.)

Best wishes, Clive
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Thank you AlpheccaStars and Clive very much, but can I omit "we" in "We warmly welcome the president of the ABC corporation, Japan "? In the past I often saw many banners hung across the streets that said " warmly welcome the President of the Republic of India" when the president came to my contry for an official visit.

I am confused about it
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Hi,

perhaps the people who write the banners don't speak great English. Omitting 'we' sounds rather odd.

You could say 'A warm welcome to the President . . . ', but this seems more wordy and less direct, to me.

Clive
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If you don't state a subject, then the verb is in the imperative mood. The subject is "you". "You" would refer to the person reading the banner. So are you asking the readers to welcome the president. That's cool... but.....

What happens when the person reading this is the president? Then you are asking him to welcome himself!
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Thank you Clive and Aphecaccstars.How about " Welcome to the president...."?
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Clive's suggestion is good - this looks fine for a banner

A warm welcome to President Michio Kariya of Nikon Corporation, Japan
or - this is more formal

Welcome to President Michio Kariya of Nikon Corporation, Japan
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Thank you AlpheccaStars very much

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