Dear teachers,
Could you please let me know the announcement by the announcer seen in the below is correct?
I think it should be said:
"Ladies and gentlemen please welcome to the stage President of Mobile
Communications business, DJ Koh." or
"Ladies and gentlemen please welcome President of Mobile
Communications business, DJ Koh to the stage."
https://singjupost.com/samsung-galaxy-s8-unpacked-2007-launch-event-full-transcript/?singlepage=1t
Announcer: Ladies and gentlemen please give a warm welcome to the stage President of Mobile
Communications business, DJ Koh.
Thanks and best regards,
David Kim
Yes, it's not very well expressed. Your suggestions are better. " If you put a comma before "DJ Koh" then you should also put one after.
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Yes, it's not very well expressed. Your suggestions are better.
???"Ladies and gentlemen please welcome President of Mobile Communications business, DJ Koh to the stage."
If you put a comma before "DJ Koh" then you should also put one after.
"business" appears to be part of his title so should also be capitalised.