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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Weird sentence as title for blogpost or not?

Hi everyone,

Is - 5 Good and Cool Longboards for Beginners - a weird sentene used as title for a blogpost?

or should it be something like 5 good and cool looking longboards for beginners or leave good or cool out, etc?

I'm not a native english speaker,... that why im wondering, plus i am very meticulous lately for my titles

thanks in advance,
  

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Is there a cool longboard that is not good? It seems to me that "cool" also implies "good," but I don't know anything about this subject. Maybe one of these: "5 Cool Longboards for Beginners" "The Top 5 Longboards for Beginners"

  • Is there a cool longboard that is not good?
  • It seems to me that "cool" also implies "good," but I don't know anything about this subject.
  • Maybe one of these: "5 Cool Longboards for Beginners" "The Top 5 Longboards for Beginners"
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Is there a cool longboard that is not good? It seems to me that "cool" also implies "good," but I don't know anything about this subject.
Maybe one of these:

"5 Cool Longboards for Beginners"
"The Top 5 Longboards for Beginners"
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Thanks for responding AlpheccaStars,

I see what you mean but i'm trying to implement both words (good and cool) into the title because of the searchvolume for those queries in google

what's the best way to implement them both?

Thanks,
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anyone cares to give an opinion?

Maybe it's not too bad as is? My biggest concern is that i'm posting with a title that is really really bad, don't think it is but still have doubts so,.....
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Most discriminating google searches would hit on "longboards" and "beginners."
"good" and "cool" would get a gazillion unrelated hits. If you want to attract Google searchers, you have to use specific terms that would be in the minds of the seekers. "Outstanding" would be more discriminating than "good."

But if you want them in your title, then this is the simplest:
Five Cool, G
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Thank you,,

'The words cool and good will be connected to the word longboards in that sentence/title so anyone searching for cool longboards or good longboards would possibly end up seing my post in the google search results. If i would leave good out for example i would less likely show up for the query good longboards, thats why i want them both.

I like your suggestion, Five

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