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Gogreen1 Posted 12 years ago
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Weird sentence?

Many well-known mitigation efforts of Chinese cities are mainly accompanied with the construction of “eco-cities” which was encouraged by Chinese authorities since mid 2000s.
  

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I wouldn't say it was "weird" exactly, but it is quite poorly written and not completely clear about what it is trying to say.

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  • I wouldn't say it was "weird" exactly, but it is quite poorly written and not completely clear about what it is trying to say.
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I wouldn't say it was "weird" exactly, but it is quite poorly written and not completely clear about what it is trying to say.
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Could you tell me which part of the sentence is poor?
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gogreen1efforts of Chinese cities
People can make efforts, but cities can't.
gogreen1mitigation efforts
Efforts to mitigate what? It's not clear.
gogreen1accompanied with
accompanied by


accompanied is a weak verb here. There must be a stronger relationship bet
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