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Tildetdouspart Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Wedding speech please check my grammar

Good evening, everyone! For those of you who do not know me, my name is Jane Doe. I am the mother of the beautiful bride.

I would like to thank everyone for coming here tonight. I hope you are all enjoying the foods and drinks. The desserts will be served later.

Thanks to the bridesmaids and maid of honor for helping and organizing what has been needed for the wedding without too much stress on Jan and Jim. Thank you all for your time and support.

Speaking of time...time really flies. It was just yesterday that you were in elementary school, Jan and here you are now in your wedding gown. I know that this is the happiest day of your life, that you’ve finally found “the one”, your Mr. Right. I thank God that you’ve met Jim to be the love of your life.

Congratulations! I wish you both a truly blessed married life. I just can’t wait to hug and kiss my beautiful grandchildren.

  

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tildetdouspart It was just yesterday that you were in elementary school In the previous text, "you" refers to the guests. You need to have a sentence that switches the focus from "you" the audience to "you" the bride.

  • tildetdouspart It was just yesterday that you were in elementary school In the previous text, "you" refers to the guests.
  • You need to have a sentence that switches the focus from "you" the audience to "you" the bride.
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tildetdouspart It was just yesterday that you were in elementary school

In the previous text, "you" refers to the guests. You need to have a sentence that switches the focus from "you" the audience to "you" the bride.

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