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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Wedding Speech help

Hi,

Can somebody please proofread this for me, I need it to be as perfect as possible!

PATTY SAY IN CHINESE AND ENGLISH. Welcome to everyone. Thank you all
for coming and joining us to celebrate Katherine and Terry’s wedding. For our Chinese
and English-speaking guests, I will speak Chinese and my son, Darrel will translate into
English. DARREL WILL START TRANSLATION. I am so happy so many guests from
both families traveled from different states and some came as far as Australia, Taiwan
and China.

First I like to introduce both sides of the family. Grandmother, grandfather, and Terry’s
father Tony and mother Joy and sister Jasmine.

As the mother of the bride, I will follow the tradition and say a few words. Since
Katherine was born, she has developed into a very nice young person, she has always
been self sufficient, always planning ahead and knows what she wants. I have never
had to worry about her. She’s very independent starting from grammar school to
graduating college and pursing her career. Currently she is attending graduate school
and her 5-years goal from today is to get her CPA license and have children. She has
developed into a very nice young person, she is respectful, kind and very thoughtful of
her grandparents and myself. She is a good granddaughter and good daughter. And I am
very proud of her and greatful to have her in my life.

Katherine and Terry met each other 5 years ago in California. They were introduced by
the maid of honor Marico. I am so happy Katherine and Terry found each other and they
get along so well. Terry is well-mannered, very respectful and considerate, always happy
and smiling with a good personality.

My friends ask me if I feel sad about my daughter getting married. I can say very loudly,
that I am very happy and totally relaxed because my daughter Katherine is marrying a
good husband. And I am gaining another son in our family.

Please join me in a toast to send best wishes for a long and happy marriage for Katherine
and Terry.
  

Top answer

Here are my suggestions (new wording in bold; deleted wording crossed out). I made some changes to clarify or make the sentences flow better. Use what you find helpful.

  • Here are my suggestions (new wording in bold; deleted wording crossed out).
  • I made some changes to clarify or make the sentences flow better.
  • Use what you find helpful.
  • PATTY SAY S (IN CHINESE AND ENGLISH).
  • Welcome to everyone.
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Here are my suggestions (new wording in bold; deleted wording crossed out). I made some changes to clarify or make the sentences flow better. Use what you find helpful.


PATTY SAYS (IN CHINESE AND ENGLISH). Welcome to everyone. Thank you all
for coming and joining us to as we celebrate Katherine and Terry's wedding. To accomodate For
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Doctor DKatherine and Terry met each other 5 years ago in California. They were introduced by
the maid of honor, Marico. I am delighted so happy Katherine and Terry found each other and that they get along so well. Terry is well-mannered, very respectful and considerate, always happy and smiling, and has with a good personality.
Shouldn't it be 5 year goal
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Actually she has two goals, so you should say "her five-year goals are ..."

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