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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Website translation
Hi,
I'm seventeen, and recently I get my first "job". I have to translate a website in English.
I won't get so much money (20€ for more than 3000 words), but this job is very important for me. It's a test that will show me my english level.
This is the first part of my work :
<<We created EFACTO (society's name) to combat one of the most appalling faces of the globalization. The statement is simple : major international companies get products for the lowest price and sell them up to ten times more expensive.
On this website, there is no middlemen, no expensive margin : you choose the product you are dreaming of, and you get it for the best price. That's our concept : "Direct from the factory"
Here stand all kind of products : decoration, house-equipment, fashion, sports item... There are cheap... and also chic ! Welcome on EFACTO's world !
Can i cancel my order ? To cancel an order, you have to come into contact with us, just giving its identification number. This process will be instantaneously confirmed with an email. You are allowed to cancel your order until your product(s) will come in our warehouses. Look at your order's details to see if you are within the time limit to ask for cancelling, or not ! However, you get seven days after the delivery to give us back your product(s) : that is our "money-back guarantee".>>
Can you have a look at it, and tell me if it's correct or not !
Thank you very much,
Seb.
I'm seventeen, and recently I get my first "job". I have to translate a website in English.
I won't get so much money (20€ for more than 3000 words), but this job is very important for me. It's a test that will show me my english level.
This is the first part of my work :
<<We created EFACTO (society's name) to combat one of the most appalling faces of the globalization. The statement is simple : major international companies get products for the lowest price and sell them up to ten times more expensive.
On this website, there is no middlemen, no expensive margin : you choose the product you are dreaming of, and you get it for the best price. That's our concept : "Direct from the factory"
Here stand all kind of products : decoration, house-equipment, fashion, sports item... There are cheap... and also chic ! Welcome on EFACTO's world !
Can i cancel my order ? To cancel an order, you have to come into contact with us, just giving its identification number. This process will be instantaneously confirmed with an email. You are allowed to cancel your order until your product(s) will come in our warehouses. Look at your order's details to see if you are within the time limit to ask for cancelling, or not ! However, you get seven days after the delivery to give us back your product(s) : that is our "money-back guarantee".>>
Can you have a look at it, and tell me if it's correct or not !
Thank you very much,
Seb.
Top answer
I have made a few suggesitons. Anonymous <<We created EFACTO (society's name) to combat one of the most appalling faces of the globalization. ) products for the lowest price and sell them for up to ten times more expensive .
- I have made a few suggesitons.
- Anonymous <<We created EFACTO (society's name) to combat one of the most appalling faces of the globalization.
- ) products for the lowest price and sell them for up to ten times more expensive .
- On this website, there are is no middlemen, no expensive margin s : you choose the product you are dreaming of, and you get it for the best price.
- ) all kind of products : decoration s , house hold equipment, fashion, sports item s ...
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I have made a few suggesitons.
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