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Miilo Posted 9 years ago
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My favourite season is spring . It's from january to april . I really like the spring because it's oftens cooler than the summer and warmer than the winter . The spring makes me feel relaxed and excited . Tet holiday, valentine and my birthday.. all in the spring

  

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Good comparisons but you need to capitalize 'January, April, and Valentine's day' since they are proper nouns. The third sentence should be the adverb of frequency 'often' not oftens. miilo Tet holiday, valentine and my birthday..

  • Good comparisons but you need to capitalize 'January, April, and Valentine's day' since they are proper nouns.
  • The third sentence should be the adverb of frequency 'often' not oftens.
  • miilo Tet holiday, valentine and my birthday..
  • all in the spring You should also take away ..
  • and replace it with 'are'.
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Good comparisons but you need to capitalize 'January, April, and Valentine's day' since they are proper nouns.


The third sentence should be the adverb of frequency 'often' not oftens.

miiloTet holiday, valentine and my birthday.. all in the spring

You should also take away .. and replace it with 'are'.

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