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Sun 94 Posted 6 years ago
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Wearing a helmet

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Every year, approximately 50 percent of bicycle fatalities involve children and 75 of those deaths are caused by head injuries. Helmets are key when it comes to injury prevention, reducing risk of head injury by more than 50%.

  

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sun 94 If you see any mistakes, can you help to identify them? Every year, approximately 50 percent of bicycle fatalities involve children and 75 of those deaths are caused by head injuries. Helmets are key when it comes to injury prevention, reducing risk of head injury by more than 50%.

  • sun 94 If you see any mistakes, can you help to identify them?
  • Every year, approximately 50 percent of bicycle fatalities involve children and 75 of those deaths are caused by head injuries.
  • Helmets are key when it comes to injury prevention, reducing risk of head injury by more than 50%.
  • Comma after "children".
  • It needs to be "75 percent".
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sun 94

If you see any mistakes, can you help to identify them?

Every year, approximately 50 percent of bicycle fatalities involve children and 75 of those deaths are caused by head injuries. Helmets are key when it comes to injury prevention, reducing risk of head injury by more than 50%.

Comma after "children". It ne

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