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Weak minded person
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Announcer xx committed suicide at her house. The rumours of her dating a famour baseball player xx seems to have caused her stress and she might have been weak minded. On a piece of paper found at her home, she expressed that the rumours gave her stress . I feel sorry for her.
Announcer xx committed suicide at her house. The rumours of her dating a famour baseball player xx seems to have caused her stress and she might have been weak minded. On a piece of paper found at her home, she expressed that the rumours gave her stress . I feel sorry for her.
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XX, the announcer , committed suicide at her home. The rumours of her dating the famous baseball player , XX, seem to have caused her severe emotional stress. In a note found with her , she said that the rumours caused her anxiety/distress/shame/embarrassment .
- XX, the announcer , committed suicide at her home.
- The rumours of her dating the famous baseball player , XX, seem to have caused her severe emotional stress.
- In a note found with her , she said that the rumours caused her anxiety/distress/shame/embarrassment .
- I feel sorry for her.
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XX, the announcer, committed suicide at her home. The rumours of her dating the famous baseball player, XX, seem to have caused her severe emotional stress. In a note found with her, she said that the rumours caused her anxiety/distress/shame/embarrassment. I feel sorry for her.
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