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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago

Weak

Outside, sweet cherry blossoms

radiating with life.

The sun's glory, and

april rain, rejuvenating every

body but my soul

its weak from all the shows..

Stories of a lost love,

it keeps playing in my head

and I can't stop the rain..

Stories of a lost mate,

it keeps playing in my head

and I can't wake up from this nightmare..

And I swear, this love I claim

will forever haunt me, through and through

each and everyday..

and my nights are now sleepless,

I am weak and dismantled

with no hope, no resolution

Oh, how this love has abandoned me,

this love I guarded with pride and trust

now has truned into ashes and dust.
  

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You have some nice phrases in there, but you should check your spelling-- there is nothing that alienates me more from a poem than careless transcription: April it's every day turned

— Mister Micawber

  • You have some nice phrases in there, but you should check your spelling-- there is nothing that alienates me more from a poem than careless transcription: April it's every day turned
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You have some nice phrases in there, but you should check your spelling-- there is nothing that alienates me more from a poem than careless transcription:

April
it's
every day
turned
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Anonymouseach and everyday..

each day and every day (two words.)

We don't wear our everyday clothes when we go to formal events. (adjective)

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