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JKBelieve Posted 21 years ago
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'we must be sure about tutankhamen's kingship'
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00 Please tell me if this sentence is a good sentence 02 br
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00 'order to learn about the life of a pharaoh in the New Kingdom period through Tutankhamen's tomb we must be sure about Tutankhamen's kingship.' 02 br
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00 is it a good sentence which conveys its meaning clearly? if not, how can i improve it? 0-
00 Please tell me if this sentence is a good sentence 02 br
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00 'order to learn about the life of a pharaoh in the New Kingdom period through Tutankhamen's tomb we must be sure about Tutankhamen's kingship.' 02 br
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00 is it a good sentence which conveys its meaning clearly? if not, how can i improve it? 0-
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0 There seems to be a word missing at the beginning: 02 br
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00 ' 01 b 00 In 02 b 00 order to learn about the life of a pharaoh in the New Kingdom period through Tutankhamen's tomb we must be sure about Tutankhamen's kingship.' 02 br
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00 It's longer than necessary. I like this better: 02 br
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00 'In order to learn ab
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00 ' 01 b 00 In 02 b 00 order to learn about the life of a pharaoh in the New Kingdom period through Tutankhamen's tomb we must be sure about Tutankhamen's kingship.' 02 br
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00 It's longer than necessary. I like this better: 02 br
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00 'In order to learn ab
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