Are both OK:
We had finished dinner, we're/we were now having dessert, and we had the most beautiful piece of chocolate cake.
No. You are trying to say too much in one sentence. Say eg We had finished dinner and we were now having dessert.
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No.
You are trying to say too much in one sentence. Say
eg We had finished dinner and we were now having dessert. We were having the most beautiful piece of chocolate cake.
eg We have finished dinner and we're now having dessert. We are having the most beautiful piece of chocolate cake.