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FatimaSaboor123 Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Wayfare

I saw you, wayfaring on the white carpet, talking in the most humble and mature way.

Is it correct to use wayfare here? and by "white carpet", I mean land covered with snow.

Please, also let me know of any grammatical errors present in the sentence.

  

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The sentence is grammatical, but, unless the context in which it appears supports it, the usage is strikingly awkward. Wayfare is not used like this. " Casually calling snow-covered ground a "white carpet" is overly melodramatic.

  • The sentence is grammatical, but, unless the context in which it appears supports it, the usage is strikingly awkward.
  • Wayfare is not used like this.
  • " Casually calling snow-covered ground a "white carpet" is overly melodramatic.
  • And the words "humble" and "mature" would rarely be used to describe the same thing.
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The sentence is grammatical, but, unless the context in which it appears supports it, the usage is strikingly awkward. Wayfare is not used like this. This is a word that's almost never heard today, and would be used only in a literary and/or whimsical sense, for example: "Our dog got lost, and after wayfaring - *** knows where - for a year, he finally found his way home." Casually calling

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I saw you wandering on a white, cold carpet of snow musing to yourself about the meaning of life.

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