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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Waving backpack

Does this sentence make sense? Is it correct and can you picture this?
The kids was waving his backpack around by the handle spinning in circle.

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Anonymous The kids kid was waving his backpack around by the handle spinning in circle s . I can certainly picture something, but I don't know if it's what you intended. The kid himself was spinning in a circle while holding his backpack by the handle.

— CalifJim

  • Anonymous The kids kid was waving his backpack around by the handle spinning in circle s .
  • I can certainly picture something, but I don't know if it's what you intended.
  • The kid himself was spinning in a circle while holding his backpack by the handle.
  • If you meant that the kid was standing still spinning the backpack in a circle, add "it": spinning it in circles .
  • "in circle" is wrong.
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AnonymousThe kids kid was waving his backpack around by the handle spinning in circles.
I can certainly picture something, but I don't know if it's what you intended. The kid himself was spinning in a circle while holding his backpack by the handle.

If you meant that t
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