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Quaerereverum Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Wave erosion
Hello,
Is my paragraph proper?
The lecture is about erosion which he defines as wearing away the Earth's surface by means of wind or water. The professor states that the most common type of the erosion is coastal erosion. Waves erode shoreline in 2 ways. First, wave abrasion. It happens when the shorelines are made up loose materials, so every time water waves hit the shoreline tiny rock in waves scrap a rock surface and dislodge loose and weak debris from the rock. Therefore, the British shorelines have the appearance as if they cut into. Second , waves impact. Waves pound rocks and create cracks within a rock. Every time waves hit the rocks, the water compresses the air in the crack, resulting rocks break apart.
Thank you in advance.
Is my paragraph proper?
The lecture is about erosion which he defines as wearing away the Earth's surface by means of wind or water. The professor states that the most common type of the erosion is coastal erosion. Waves erode shoreline in 2 ways. First, wave abrasion. It happens when the shorelines are made up loose materials, so every time water waves hit the shoreline tiny rock in waves scrap a rock surface and dislodge loose and weak debris from the rock. Therefore, the British shorelines have the appearance as if they cut into. Second , waves impact. Waves pound rocks and create cracks within a rock. Every time waves hit the rocks, the water compresses the air in the crack, resulting rocks break apart.
Thank you in advance.
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I would make the following changes (in bold or strikeout). The lecture is about erosion, which he defines as the wearing away of the Earth's surface by means of wind or water. The professor states that the most common type of the erosion is coastal erosion.
- I would make the following changes (in bold or strikeout).
- The lecture is about erosion, which he defines as the wearing away of the Earth's surface by means of wind or water.
- The professor states that the most common type of the erosion is coastal erosion.
- Waves erode shoreline s in two 2 ways.
- First, wave abrasion.
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I would make the following changes (in bold or strikeout).
The lecture is about erosion, which he defines as the wearing away of the Earth's surface by means of wind or water. The professor states that the most common type ofthe erosion is coastal erosion. Waves erode shorelines in two 2 ways. First, wave abrasion. It
The lecture is about erosion, which he defines as the wearing away of the Earth's surface by means of wind or water. The professor states that the most common type of
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You are using the phrase "each time" so the logical companion is "a wave." You do not have several waves striking during a single moment.
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