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Ben9108 Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
water analysis report exceeded limit
0 I would like to seek comment for the following letter for replying to government 02 br
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00 Dear Sir 02 br
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00 From the water analysis report 00 for Nov 2007 00 , the 00 soild particle in the swimming pool system of 200 mg/L that 00 00 has exceeded the limit 00 of 100mg/L 00 . The reason is 00 that 00 a malfunction of 00 circulation 00 pump lead 00 ing 00 to the system was operating abnormally. Subsequent to 00 00 its prompt repair, the system has resumed normal operation and 00 00 the reading of soild particle was 85 00 00 mg/L 00 00 and 00 00 20 00 00 mg/L 00 lower than the limit of 100mg/L which shown in the attached report for Dec 00 00 2007 00 & Jan 2008 00 respectively 00 . 00 00 The 00 00 overall 00 00 performance of the system is indicated in the attached water analysis report for 00 00 Nov, 00 00 Dec 00 00 200 00 7 & J 00 a 00 n 00 00 2008 00 . 02 br
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00 Dear Sir 02 br
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00 From the water analysis report 00 for Nov 2007 00 , the 00 soild particle in the swimming pool system of 200 mg/L that 00 00 has exceeded the limit 00 of 100mg/L 00 . The reason is 00 that 00 a malfunction of 00 circulation 00 pump lead 00 ing 00 to the system was operating abnormally. Subsequent to 00 00 its prompt repair, the system has resumed normal operation and 00 00 the reading of soild particle was 85 00 00 mg/L 00 00 and 00 00 20 00 00 mg/L 00 lower than the limit of 100mg/L which shown in the attached report for Dec 00 00 2007 00 & Jan 2008 00 respectively 00 . 00 00 The 00 00 overall 00 00 performance of the system is indicated in the attached water analysis report for 00 00 Nov, 00 00 Dec 00 00 200 00 7 & J 00 a 00 n 00 00 2008 00 . 02 br
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Top answer
) I'm not sure what's standard. ) 02 br 02 br 00 I'd break the first sentence into two. " - - , the 01 u 00 solid 02 u 00 particulate matter reading (or whatever) 01 u 00 in / for 02 u 00 the swimming pool system stands at 200 mg/L.
- ) I'm not sure what's standard.
- ) 02 br 02 br 00 I'd break the first sentence into two.
- " - - , the 01 u 00 solid 02 u 00 particulate matter reading (or whatever) 01 u 00 in / for 02 u 00 the swimming pool system stands at 200 mg/L.
- 02 br 02 br 00 "Subsequent to" seems a little much.
- I'd just say, "Following its prompt repair," 02 br 02 br 00 was 85 mg/L, 15 mg/L below limit.
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0 Hi Ben, 02 br
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00 The stuff in the pool needs an uncountable noun, since you're weighing it in miligrams (per liter.) I'm not sure what's standard. I hear things like "particulate matter." ("Particle" is a countable noun.) 02 br
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00 I'd break the first sentence into two. " - - , the 01 u 00 solid 02 u 00 particulate matter reading (
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00 The stuff in the pool needs an uncountable noun, since you're weighing it in miligrams (per liter.) I'm not sure what's standard. I hear things like "particulate matter." ("Particle" is a countable noun.) 02 br
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00 I'd break the first sentence into two. " - - , the 01 u 00 solid 02 u 00 particulate matter reading (
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