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Jackson6612 Posted 16 years ago
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Watching satisfactorily his child being ravaged and consumed
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I have always been trapped between these battles of demons and angels and all this is happening iside my minf where I lead both sides. No one is going to win because I don't which side to take side with. And through/throughout all these internal warfares God has been a calm spectator, watching satisfactorily his child being ravaged and consumed by his own sorrows and pains.
I have always been trapped between these battles of demons and angels and all this is happening iside my minf where I lead both sides. No one is going to win because I don't which side to take side with. And through/throughout all these internal warfares God has been a calm spectator, watching satisfactorily his child being ravaged and consumed by his own sorrows and pains.
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I have underlined some problem areas: I have always been trapped between these battles of demons and ange ls an d all this is happening iside my minf where I lead both sides. No one is going to w in be cause I don't which side to take side with. And through/throughout all these internal warfares *** has been a calm spectator, watching satisfactorily his child being ravaged and consumed by his own sorrows and pains.
- I have underlined some problem areas: I have always been trapped between these battles of demons and ange ls an d all this is happening iside my minf where I lead both sides.
- No one is going to w in be cause I don't which side to take side with.
- And through/throughout all these internal warfares *** has been a calm spectator, watching satisfactorily his child being ravaged and consumed by his own sorrows and pains.
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I have underlined some problem areas:
I have always been trapped between these battles of demons and angels and all this is happening iside my minf where I lead both sides. No one is going to win because I don't which side to take side with. And through/throughout all these internal warfares *** has been a calm spectator, wa
I have always been trapped between these battles of demons and angels and all this is happening iside my minf where I lead both sides. No one is going to win because I don't which side to take side with. And through/throughout all these internal warfares *** has been a calm spectator, wa
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I have always been trapped between these battles of demons and angels, and all this is happening inside my mind where I lead both sides. No one is going to win this war because I don't know which side to take side with. And through/throughout all these internal warfares *** has
been a calm spectator, watching satisfactorily His child being ravaged and consumed by his own sorrows
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How about your trying to fix them first? And wait until you get to a computer. Doing English work on your mobile phone is like doing your math homework with your fingers and toes: not a very serious effort.
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Hi Mr Micawber
I'm on my computer now. I have read it again and didn't find anything wrong with it. Obviously, there are mistakes that's the reason you underlined them. Could you please help me now? I'm genuinely interested to correct my mistakes.
I'm on my computer now. I have read it again and didn't find anything wrong with it. Obviously, there are mistakes that's the reason you underlined them. Could you please help me now? I'm genuinely interested to correct my mistakes.
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I have always been trapped in these battles of demons and angels, and all this is happening inside my mind, where I lead both sides. No one is going to win, because I don't which side to champion. And through/throughout all these internal warfares *** has been a calm spectator, watching with satisfaction his child being ravaged and consumed by his
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