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Quaerereverum Posted 15 years ago
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Watching a performance on TV or live

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  • You can watch a performance on TV or live, but I prefer to watch it on TV for two reasons. First, I have a better view of the scene since a performance will be shown from different angles, but when you watch live , there is no guarantee that you would have a good view, unless your seat is in the first rows. Second, it is by far cheaper to watch a performance on TV. But, when you watch live you have to pay lots of money for a parking lot and a ticket. Finally, it provides convenience to watch a performance on TV, since you can eat or drink and watch your program on TV.
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You can watch a performance on TV or in person , but I prefer to watch it on TV for three reasons. First, I have a better view on TV, since a performance will be aired from different angles ; when I watch in person , there is no guarantee that I will have a good view unless my seat is in the front rows. Second, it is by far cheaper to watch a performance on TV .

  • You can watch a performance on TV or in person , but I prefer to watch it on TV for three reasons.
  • First, I have a better view on TV, since a performance will be aired from different angles ; when I watch in person , there is no guarantee that I will have a good view unless my seat is in the front rows.
  • Second, it is by far cheaper to watch a performance on TV .
  • However, when I watch in the studio or theatre, parking and a ticket are expensive.
  • Finally, it is convenient to watch a performance on TV, since you can eat and drink while you are watching.
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You can watch a performance on TV or in person, but I prefer to watch it on TV for three reasons. First, I have a better view on TV, since a performance will be aired from different angles; when I watch in person, there is no guarantee that I will have a good view unless my seat is in the front rows. Second, it is by far

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