Watched English Channels
Hi
When I asked someone to describe what he did the previous evening, he said:
After playing cricket for an hour, my son and I took bath and watched English channels till dinner at 9PM, My family members all together ate dinner and later we went to sleep.
I've underlined 3 portions of the text - am wondering if there's a better way to say them.
Also please let me know if there are any other mistakes I didn't catch.
Thank you
Top answer
writingtosms After playing cricket for an hour, my son and I took bath and watched English channels till dinner at 9PM, My family members all together ate dinner and later we went to sleep. After playing cricket for an hour, my son and I showered and watched TV. We watched a channel that broadcasts in English.
- writingtosms After playing cricket for an hour, my son and I took bath and watched English channels till dinner at 9PM, My family members all together ate dinner and later we went to sleep.
- After playing cricket for an hour, my son and I showered and watched TV.
- We watched a channel that broadcasts in English.
- Then our whole family had dinner together at 9, and later we went to bed.
- CJ
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writingtosmsAfter playing cricket for an hour, my son and I took bath and watched English channels till dinner at 9PM, My family members all together ate dinner and later we went to sleep.
After playing cricket for an hour, my son and I showered and watched TV. We watched a channel that broadcasts in English. Then our whole family had dinner together at 9
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