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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
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Wat Chalong

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On our first day in Phuket, we arrived in the late morning. After checking into our hotel, we headed to Phuket town. It is hard to resist those old Sino-Portuguese streets with their beautiful shop houses and magnificent mansions. In addition to the hoary architecture, we visited a fascinating apothecary shop, and Wat Chalong, the most important of the Buddhist temples in Phuket. We also visited a Chinese temple, which was a little different from the many Thai Buddhist temples we had visited during our trip.
  

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This is pretty good, well done!. A few edits - On our first day in Phuket, we arrived in the late morning. After checking into our hotel, we headed to the old town .

  • This is pretty good, well done!.
  • A few edits - On our first day in Phuket, we arrived in the late morning.
  • After checking into our hotel, we headed to the old town .
  • It is hard to resist those old Sino-Portuguese streets with their beautiful shops, houses and magnificent mansions.
  • In addition to the old-fashione d architecture, we visited a fascinating apothecary shop, and Wat Chalong, the most important of the Buddhist temples in Phuket.
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This is pretty good, well done!.

A few edits -

On our first day in Phuket, we arrived in the late morning. After checking into our hotel, we headed to the old town. It is hard to resist those old Sino-Portuguese streets with their beautiful shops, houses and magnific

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