Washing yesteday away

totally awesome dude..... thanx

thebob,

is this something you wrote because you have experienced this? This one is a heart breaker...... Let me know

No, i havent realy experienced it. My dad still lives, here with me, my brother and my mom. This day, i just felt realy down, and sometimes when im bord, and i have a lot on my mind, and im feelin down, i just write poetry, and this day, i had a hole lot on my mind. I was just thinkin about how bad it would be to loose a father, and iv just kinda been down, lately, so yeah. I just wrote it ca

Well maybe it is a way to release some of the sadness that you are having. I use to do the same thing sorta. I would keep a journal of my thoughts of how I felt when looking for my mother. Plus I was able to keep alot of important information that way too. So that when I would get down and out, I would go back and read what I had wrote from an earlier time.

I like the flow of this piece, it's somewhat depressing, yet captivating as well. Great work.