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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
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Analysis by experts showed that the chopsticks he had been about to eat with had been soaked in industrial sulfurous chemicals, and still retained traces. "Stop using disposable chopsticks, it is not about saving the environment anymore, it is about saving your own life," Huang wrote on the micro blog. The message was forwarded 125,000 times.
Analysis by experts showed that the chopsticks he had been about to eat with had been soaked in industrial sulfurous chemicals, and still retained traces. "Stop using disposable chopsticks, it is not about saving the environment anymore, it is about saving your own life," Huang wrote on the micro blog. The message was forwarded 125,000 times.
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" The balance of the paragraph is acceptable.
- " The balance of the paragraph is acceptable.
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Suggestion: "Analysis by experts showed that the chopsticks with which he had been about to eat had been soaked in industrial sulfurous chemicals, and still retained traces."
The balance of the paragraph is acceptable.
The balance of the paragraph is acceptable.
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