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Onelook Posted 8 years ago
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Was even more so

The village that had a thick cloud of silence enveloping it, was even more so due to the village having been deserted after the war.


not sure even more so is appropriate because a thick cloud of silence is not an adjective.

  

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onelook The village that had a thick cloud of silence enveloping it, was even more so due to the village having been deserted after the war. I'm not sure even more so is appropriate because a thick cloud of silence is not an adjective. It's not appropriate.

  • onelook The village that had a thick cloud of silence enveloping it, was even more so due to the village having been deserted after the war.
  • I'm not sure even more so is appropriate because a thick cloud of silence is not an adjective.
  • It's not appropriate.
  • Also, you can't separate the subject from the predicate with a comma.
  • You'll have to remove it.
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onelook

The village that had a thick cloud of silence enveloping it, was even more so due to the village having been deserted after the war.


I'm not sure even more so is appropriate because a thick cloud of silence is not an adjective.

It's not appropriate.

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