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Jessica York Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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0 I wake up every morning and don’t know what to wait for. 02 br
00 I live in a country full of uncertainty and doubts. 02 br
00 One never knows what to expect. 02 br
00 People here are too tired of waiting for tomorrow jam. 02 br
00 Anyway, we accept life even in such bad conditions. 02 br
00 Every country wants to be the leader---that’s what we have and, actually, this can’t change. But do we ever think of other nations?No. And we accept it. Let’s be realistic: we all are too egoistic in this world ,where everything can be sold and bought. Is it new for most people?I suppose not. 02 br
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00 To tell the truth,I entirely agree with such commercial attitude to life---why shouldn’t I? 02 br
00 After all,I’m a personality and need something that will support me in this world. And,however,typical it sounds,the thing I need is money. 02 br
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00 Actually,I don’t need much---but at least enough to get by.I’m able to work and I will use all opportunities to get a good job. I want to be useful to others.Unfortunately,this all seems almost impossible in my country.But I won’t complain ‘cause it’s OK.It’s what many people go through here,where winters are severely cold and summers are unbearably hot.This place is far from Europe.Nature is virginal and incredibly beautiful. 02 br
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00 Believe it or not, but we have no bears in the streets. Not so long ago a friend of mine got an e-mail 02 br
00 from her Italian friend with a picture where she was surrounded by white bears and penguins. 02 br
00 It’s not what we have here. 02 br
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00 Have you guessed where I live? 02 br
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00 I hope people will get me. 02 br
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00 That’s all for now. 02 br
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00 Thanks for reading this story, 02 br
00 Jessica York 0-
00 I live in a country full of uncertainty and doubts. 02 br
00 One never knows what to expect. 02 br
00 People here are too tired of waiting for tomorrow jam. 02 br
00 Anyway, we accept life even in such bad conditions. 02 br
00 Every country wants to be the leader---that’s what we have and, actually, this can’t change. But do we ever think of other nations?No. And we accept it. Let’s be realistic: we all are too egoistic in this world ,where everything can be sold and bought. Is it new for most people?I suppose not. 02 br
02 br
00 To tell the truth,I entirely agree with such commercial attitude to life---why shouldn’t I? 02 br
00 After all,I’m a personality and need something that will support me in this world. And,however,typical it sounds,the thing I need is money. 02 br
02 br
00 Actually,I don’t need much---but at least enough to get by.I’m able to work and I will use all opportunities to get a good job. I want to be useful to others.Unfortunately,this all seems almost impossible in my country.But I won’t complain ‘cause it’s OK.It’s what many people go through here,where winters are severely cold and summers are unbearably hot.This place is far from Europe.Nature is virginal and incredibly beautiful. 02 br
02 br
00 Believe it or not, but we have no bears in the streets. Not so long ago a friend of mine got an e-mail 02 br
00 from her Italian friend with a picture where she was surrounded by white bears and penguins. 02 br
00 It’s not what we have here. 02 br
02 br
02 br
00 Have you guessed where I live? 02 br
02 br
00 I hope people will get me. 02 br
02 br
00 That’s all for now. 02 br
02 br
02 br
00 Thanks for reading this story, 02 br
00 Jessica York 0-
Top answer
0 It doesn't seem like a story, Jessica, as there is no narrative. And I cannot guess where you live, because it expresses the same feelings that most of us have from time to time. 02 br 02 br 00 What you need to do in your creative writing is find in your own experience or imagination 01 b 00 specific 02 b 00 events and images, real or fictional, that convey this common human feeling in a new, individual, and compelling way, without being 'telly' (telling your reader rather than showing your reader).
- 0 It doesn't seem like a story, Jessica, as there is no narrative.
- And I cannot guess where you live, because it expresses the same feelings that most of us have from time to time.
- 02 br 02 br 00 What you need to do in your creative writing is find in your own experience or imagination 01 b 00 specific 02 b 00 events and images, real or fictional, that convey this common human feeling in a new, individual, and compelling way, without being 'telly' (telling your reader rather than showing your reader).
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0 It doesn't seem like a story, Jessica, as there is no narrative. And I cannot guess where you live, because it expresses the same feelings that most of us have from time to time. 02 br
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00 What you need to do in your creative writing is find in your own experience or imagination 01 b 00 specific 02 b 00 events and images, real or fictional, that convey th
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00 What you need to do in your creative writing is find in your own experience or imagination 01 b 00 specific 02 b 00 events and images, real or fictional, that convey th
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