Want some help with my motivation letter for university

I am applying in Denmark at marketing management and I have to do a motivation letter , but the problem is that is a general letter , and I don't specifie the university so I don't know if the begining is correct.Please help me to correct my letter where it need to be change.Plese help...This is URGENT.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am applying to your Academy Profession Degree Programme in “Marketing Management” starting in sepember 2012.

My career ambition is to become a Marketing Coordinator , because I had always been interested in marketing ,sales,research and negotiation ever since I had my first Marketing lesson in the 10th grade , where I found this subject very interesting and I knew that this is what I want to do in life. In order to reach my objective, I want to acquire advanced knowledge to combine practical and theoretical problem solving.Because I know that Denmark is a country with a proud history in business I am sure that I can accomplish all my goals and being able study at your university where I can meet my academic and cultural goals.

I am a Romanian student in the last year at “Economic Activities “ from VirgilMadgeruEconomicHigh School,where I always used my key strengths of intelligence, curiosity and perseverance. During high school, I had enriched my knowledge in economics and skills for employability, entrepreneurship, financial literacy and vocational guidance. Because I am passionate about economics, I enjoy learning and applying my knowledge. After four challenging and enjoyable years, I look forward to graduating on July .

Since childhood I practiced sports , where I leart to work in team , embrace new challenges, but moreover shape my organized, ambitious and strong character All these achievements I could put into practice in a programe that our school has organised.,it is about a virtual company where I could work like in a real one.Because I have always enjoyed being involved in leadership roles in this company I was managing Secretary and Marketing depatment.This programe was a great opportunity for me to learn pleanty of things about running a business , being organized ,communicate affectively and having the chance to participate in a firms competition where I have won four major awards.

I think study aboad is a great opportunity to gain new life experience that allows me get to know another culture first-hand ,learn a foreign language, make friends around the world, and the most important it help me to learn about myself and expand my worldview.I am confident to be accepted most of all because Denmark is recognized in Europe as the leader in education and that is because I look forward to experience this educational system that could help me to achieve my life goals.

I am confident that I will bring a high level of energy and enthusiasm to your program. I am sure to exceed your expectations, because of both my academic and interpersonal skills as well as the experience gained from my experince. I will enrich the program by enabling fellow students and professors to benefit from my ambitious and open nature.

Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.

Sincerely yours,

Anitei Ana-Maria.