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Quaerereverum Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Walk with the bare feet

Hello,

Is my sentence proper?

He was kept in a cell with a criminal prisoner who had HIV. He had to walk with the bare feet on a floor covered with the blood of criminal man, to get HIV from him.

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Hi, Is my sentence proper? He was kept in a cell with a criminal prisoner who had HIV. He had to walk with the bare feet on a floor covered with the blood of criminal man, to get HIV from him.

  • Hi, Is my sentence proper?
  • He was kept in a cell with a criminal prisoner who had HIV.
  • He had to walk with the bare feet on a floor covered with the blood of criminal man, to get HIV from him.
  • eg He was kept in a cell with a prisoner who had HIV.
  • He had to walk in bare feet on a floor covered with the blood of this criminal, and risk getting HIV from him.
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Hi,

Is my sentence proper?

He was kept in a cell with a criminal prisoner who had HIV. He had to walk with the bare feet on a floor covered with the blood of criminal man, to get HIV from him.

eg He was kept in a cell with a prisoner who had HIV. He had to walk in bare feet on a floor covered with the blood of this criminal, and risk getting

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