Volunteer reader.

Hi,

I am Software Engineering student, and I am now in the process of writing my final year dissertation, and
I would like someone whose's English is better than mine read it for me and if possible give some suggestions.

The document is not that long (5 pages only) and it is located at

http://www.profetas.greatnow.com/introduction.pdf

Any suggestion and critiques is welcome
profetas at gmail dot com

Thanks