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Naked chef Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Volunteer programme
Dear all,
Could you please check my English below? I'm writing this to inform my colleagues that I organizing the new volunteers programme and I let them know where I put the application forms and request them to keep the filled-in forms.
"I would like to inform you that there is the (*organization name) Volunteers recruitement programme for the period of August to October. The application forms can be found in the the drawer C if you are asked for it. I would be grateful if you could keep the returned forms in the yellow envelop which I put in the drawer C."
Thanks in advance
Naked Chef
Could you please check my English below? I'm writing this to inform my colleagues that I organizing the new volunteers programme and I let them know where I put the application forms and request them to keep the filled-in forms.
"I would like to inform you that there is the (*organization name) Volunteers recruitement programme for the period of August to October. The application forms can be found in the the drawer C if you are asked for it. I would be grateful if you could keep the returned forms in the yellow envelop which I put in the drawer C."
Thanks in advance
Naked Chef
Top answer
I would trim a few words out and substitute a more active verb in the opening sentence. ) "I would like to inform you that we are launching the (*organization name) Volunteers Recruitment Program for the period of August to October. The application forms can be found in drawer C if you are asked for one .
- I would trim a few words out and substitute a more active verb in the opening sentence.
- ) "I would like to inform you that we are launching the (*organization name) Volunteers Recruitment Program for the period of August to October.
- The application forms can be found in drawer C if you are asked for one .
- "
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I would trim a few words out and substitute a more active verb in the opening sentence. (Note: I am using American spelling here rather than British.)
"I would like to inform you that we are launching the (*organization name) Volunteers Recruitment Program for the period of August to October. The application forms can be found in drawer C if you are asked for on
"I would like to inform you that we are launching the (*organization name) Volunteers Recruitment Program for the period of August to October. The application forms can be found in drawer C if you are asked for on
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