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Hitchiker Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Vocabulary
Please be informed that we did not publish the job ad which was scheduled to publish on 3rd September as we did not receive the payment on last monday and our office was closed on following 9 days regarding Christmas . Therefore kindly let us know on which day's edition you need to publish your advertisment.
check above paragraph for any vocabulary mistakes and grammer mistakes and please correct it.And tell if there is any other way i could explain what i am trying to explain in the above paragraph
check above paragraph for any vocabulary mistakes and grammer mistakes and please correct it.And tell if there is any other way i could explain what i am trying to explain in the above paragraph
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I'm afraid it does not make sense. What does a Christmas holiday have to do with September? Did you receive payment for the ad publication?
- I'm afraid it does not make sense.
- What does a Christmas holiday have to do with September?
- Did you receive payment for the ad publication?
- The first sentence probably should be: We will not publish your job ad originally scheduled for the September 3rd edition because we did not receive the payment before the due date.
- I'm not sure about the rest, because I don't know if you have since received the payment, and are asking for a new publication date or not.
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I'm afraid it does not make sense.
What does a Christmas holiday have to do with September? Did you receive payment for the ad publication?
The first sentence probably should be:
We will not publish your job ad originally scheduled for the September 3rd edition because we did not receive the payment before the due date.
I'm not sure about the rest, because I do
What does a Christmas holiday have to do with September? Did you receive payment for the ad publication?
The first sentence probably should be:
We will not publish your job ad originally scheduled for the September 3rd edition because we did not receive the payment before the due date.
I'm not sure about the rest, because I do
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Please be informed that we did not publish the job ad which was scheduled to publish on 3rd September as we did not receive the payment on last Monday and following 4 days were public holidays for us .Since our bank was closed on those 4 days we could not confirm your payment. Therefore kindly let us know on which day's edition should be proceed the publication.
kindly correct the above p
kindly correct the above p
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Please be informed that we did not publish the job ad which was scheduled to be published on 3rd September as we did not receive the payment --on-- last Monday and following 4 days were public holidays for us. Since our bank was closed on those 4 days we could not confirm your payment. Therefore kindly let us know on which day's edition you wish the ad to be published. --shou
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