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Perfect Stranger Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

Vocab question no. 12 - onward(s) + toward in one sentence

Dear all,

Can we use onward and toward in one sentence? Would you be so kind and have a look at my sentence? Thank you.

We wish to gradually make a shift from extensive growth to intensive growth by moving onward towards lean management, and thus promoting value defined by our customers.
  

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Yes. You can move onwards towards something, just as you can eg move backwards towards something or sideways towards something. Your sentence seems to be expressed in very general terms.

  • Yes.
  • You can move onwards towards something, just as you can eg move backwards towards something or sideways towards something.
  • Your sentence seems to be expressed in very general terms.
  • I don't understand how the part after the comma follows from the previous part.
  • In other words, what is the connection that is implied by the word 'thus'?
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Yes. You can move onwards towards something, just as you can eg move backwards towards something or sideways towards something.

Your sentence seems to be expressed in very general terms. I don't understand how the part after the comma follows from the previous part. In other words, what is the connection that is implied by t
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Hi Clive,

I wanted to say that the shift to lean management will help the comoany redifine its approach towards customers any they will actually stand for the company's greatest value.
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I don't know what you meany by 'customers . will . . . stand for . . . value'. You need to say it another way.
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CliveYour sentence seems to be expressed in very general terms. I don't understand how the part after the comma follows from the previous part. In other words, what is the connection that is implied by the word 'thus'?
I thought that thus could be used here in the sense of: as the consequence of...
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I don't understand how that is a consequence of what you said earlier in the sentence.

We are moving away from a discussion of English and more into a discussion of meaning. The meaning that you choose to convey is really up to you, not me.

Clive

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