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TinaMr Posted 12 years ago
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Could you have a look, if this sentence sound OK.
"I'd like to emphasise that i find you series of articles on the fame and fascination of famous people very riveting"
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"I'd like to emphasize that I find your series of articles on the fame and fascination of famous people riveting . " Edits as shown. I'd delete 'very'.

  • "I'd like to emphasize that I find your series of articles on the fame and fascination of famous people riveting .
  • " Edits as shown.
  • I'd delete 'very'.
  • You can't really grade 'riveting'.
  • I'd speak of eg 'celebrities', instead of 'famous people'.
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"I'd like to emphasize that I find your series of articles on the fame and fascination of famous people riveting."


Edits as shown.

I'd delete 'very'. You can't really grade 'riveting'.


I'd speak of
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Clive, thank you for your reply and help! When I re-read it, I found some misspellings myself, corrected them and re-posted the the message. Mainly, I had doubts about using "riveting". Are "riveting" and "interesting" interchangeable?

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