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Sundarnaz Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Visiting Mars 2

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The people there are neither friendly nor loving. They don't know who is living with them in the next room. They live just for their own self. Though, at first, I was so impressed by their well developed technologies, cheap sources of energy, and their comfortable living style, but when I saw how inhumane, selfish, and lonely they are! I abandoned the idea of living there forever. Then,I packed my luggage and came back to my dear Mother, The Earth.

  

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The people there are neither friendly nor loving. They don't know who is living with them in the next door. room.

  • The people there are neither friendly nor loving.
  • They don't know who is living with them in the next door.
  • room.
  • They live a secluded life.
  • just for their own self.
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The people there are neither friendly nor loving. They don't know who is living with them in the next door. room. They live a secluded life. just for their own self. Though, at first, I was so impressed by their well-developed technol

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