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Ocsenttdd Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Visit to a famous city
Dear teachers. Here is my first long pharagraph. Please help me correct the mistake, thanks in advance.
Several weeks ago, my dad and I visited Singapore, one of the most famous city in Asia.
Singapore is a smaill island located on Southern and Middle-West of Malaysia. It is a small and narrow land combining Singapore and Johore Bahru, the West Sounth of Malysia. Nowaday Singapore is independent state.
Singapore city is extremely beautiful. It is well-known for many of traders and activities. There are many sightseeings such as: Tiger Balm Garden, Botanical Garden and Raffles Museum. Moreover, Singapore also have many of important reseach centres such as: NUS, Nayang University, Polytechnique University. Being the famous city, everyday there are hundreds of people from around the world arrive to work or enjoy the sights of the city. Therefore Singapore have large and beautiful airports, and its habours are always full of ships.
There are some night classes for the one who can not go to day school for some reason or others can continue their studies. Nowaday the Govement of Singapore is trying its best to develop the city for common benefits.
During my stay in this city, everyday I went for a walk with my dad and looked at excitment and beautiful places.
Once, I went to Tiger Balm where I saw some statue of people, animals and other strange creatures. They are very well-designed by clever sculputures. We spent almost a half day at there.
Another day we visited museums, at these ones I could see hundreds of valuable things preserved for scholar and others. Furthermore, there are many things in museum for us to learn new knowledge.
I also visited some harbours and saw big ships anchored there. The sight of ships aroused a desire in me to accross oceans and go around the world. I was deeply impressed by the activites at the harbour.
Each nights, I wernt around the city and visited parks, other sights. Much many of lightinings and line of vehicle in busy make the city more alive. I visited theathes as well.
In sumary, I love every moment of my stay in this famous city of Singapore.
Several weeks ago, my dad and I visited Singapore, one of the most famous city in Asia.
Singapore is a smaill island located on Southern and Middle-West of Malaysia. It is a small and narrow land combining Singapore and Johore Bahru, the West Sounth of Malysia. Nowaday Singapore is independent state.
Singapore city is extremely beautiful. It is well-known for many of traders and activities. There are many sightseeings such as: Tiger Balm Garden, Botanical Garden and Raffles Museum. Moreover, Singapore also have many of important reseach centres such as: NUS, Nayang University, Polytechnique University. Being the famous city, everyday there are hundreds of people from around the world arrive to work or enjoy the sights of the city. Therefore Singapore have large and beautiful airports, and its habours are always full of ships.
There are some night classes for the one who can not go to day school for some reason or others can continue their studies. Nowaday the Govement of Singapore is trying its best to develop the city for common benefits.
During my stay in this city, everyday I went for a walk with my dad and looked at excitment and beautiful places.
Once, I went to Tiger Balm where I saw some statue of people, animals and other strange creatures. They are very well-designed by clever sculputures. We spent almost a half day at there.
Another day we visited museums, at these ones I could see hundreds of valuable things preserved for scholar and others. Furthermore, there are many things in museum for us to learn new knowledge.
I also visited some harbours and saw big ships anchored there. The sight of ships aroused a desire in me to accross oceans and go around the world. I was deeply impressed by the activites at the harbour.
Each nights, I wernt around the city and visited parks, other sights. Much many of lightinings and line of vehicle in busy make the city more alive. I visited theathes as well.
In sumary, I love every moment of my stay in this famous city of Singapore.
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OK here's what I think: Several weeks ago, my dad and I visited Singapore, one of the most famous cit ies in Asia. Singapore is a small island located on Southern and Middle-West south west of Malaysia. It is a small and narrow is land combining Singapore and Johore Bahru , the West South of Malysia .
- OK here's what I think: Several weeks ago, my dad and I visited Singapore, one of the most famous cit ies in Asia.
- Singapore is a small island located on Southern and Middle-West south west of Malaysia.
- It is a small and narrow is land combining Singapore and Johore Bahru , the West South of Malysia .
- Nowaday s Singapore is an independent state.
- Singapore city is extremely beautiful.
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OK here's what I think:
Several weeks ago, my dad and I visited Singapore, one of the most famous cities in Asia.
Singapore is a small island locatedon Southern and Middle-West south west of Malaysia. It is a small and narrow island combining Singapore and Johore Bahru, the West South of Malysia. Nowadays Singapore is an i
Several weeks ago, my dad and I visited Singapore, one of the most famous cities in Asia.
Singapore is a small island located
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