It's an undeniable fact that violence media leads to the development of violence in social. From my own perspective, I totally agree with this statement because people who are exposed to tremedously brutal videos, games, or films gradually form threatening and violent behaviors.
Children who is on average from 5 to 10 spend most of their time on watching films or playing games. Nowadays, most films or games have some of violent features like: slaughterous scenes, terrorism,... If children are usually exposed to crime and brutality at the early age, they will resort to violence when their emotional gets negative. When they become adolescent, they may imitate to brutal actions from films, and often bully their friends,.... Some adolescent may have thought of killing somebody. When they grow up, they feasibly become murderer or slaughterer,..... which need to be eliminated from society. Violence in society can be explicitly expressed by school violence. For instance, in Korea, a boy ,who was 14 years old, had suffered from physical abuse and he had been pushed down from the 15th floor of the department and he dead. This murder caused by students who was his classmates.
Moreover, terrorists float many videos which is about horrendous mass shootings, slaughter innocent civilians on social media in order to terrified people especially International Organization around the world . Those terror groups propagate ill will to people who are illiterate and encourage them to participate in these violent activities.
In conclusion, violence in social media have huge influence on violence in society. But the most important things is that you shouldn't let yourself affect violent things in social media
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Topic: Violence in the media promotes violence in society. What extent do you agree or disagree?
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It's an undeniable fact that violence media (wrong expression. These two nouns do not have any meaning together.) leads to the development of violence in social. (Social is an adjective. You cannot use it as an object of a preposition.) From my own perspective, I totally agree with this