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Meooo Posted 5 years ago
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Violence in playgrounds is increasing .However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies. Discuss this view and give your own opinion

It is true that violence in playgrounds has become more and more common.. Conflicts usually happen between students or children. Almost parents believed that their children should not hit back .However, the others teach children to do that to protect themselves..In my opinion, both of ways have a little bit true .

Parents have a big responsibility about preparing for their children some skills life. They have to handle situations in right way to limit conflicts. In the case of being bullied, they do not really need to hit back. They can call for helping from adults or the others around them. Additionally, the most important thing is that parents should teach their children to try not to promole volence. They maintain that way led to deter bullying is to fight against it.

On the contrary, teaching children to hit back at bullies is a cause lead to negative behaviors. Parents said that children ought to reflex to save themselves. But they can not see the problems that it can not be solved by violence, it may be more serious and makes itself terribly . Moreover, children awill be more naughty because their behavior have change. They might be injured or effect on another things.

In conclusion, I belive that perents should teach their children about positives and negatives about but back or not at bullies.

  

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