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Peaceblinkfriend Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
"...victims and their family may feel unfair."
Hi all
I was just wondering if this reads naturally. I am particular unsure about the part in bold. I reckon I could have written '...their family may feel they have been treated unfairly', but I wanted to keep it succint.
This can lead to a more dispassionate judge but victims and their family may feel unfair.
Thank you
PBF
I was just wondering if this reads naturally. I am particular unsure about the part in bold. I reckon I could have written '...their family may feel they have been treated unfairly', but I wanted to keep it succint.
This can lead to a more dispassionate judge but victims and their family may feel unfair.
Thank you
PBF
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but victims and their families may feel they have been treated unfairly. but victims and their families may find it unfair.
- but victims and their families may feel they have been treated unfairly.
- but victims and their families may find it unfair.
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... but victims and their families may feel they have been treated unfairly.
... but victims and their families may find it unfair.
... but victims and their families may find it unfair.
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Yours is too succinct; it is ungrammatical. Try this:
This can lead to a more dispassionate judge, but victims and their family may feel unfairly treated.
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Yours is too succinct; it is ungrammatical. Try this:
This can lead to a more dispassionate judge, but victims and their family may feel unfairly treated.
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To me this feel incomplete.
Victims and their families may feel they have been unfairly treated?
They cannot feel unfair. That doesn't work.
It may be unfair that this can lead to a more dispassionate judge.
Does this help?
=^^=
Victims and their families may feel they have been unfairly treated?
They cannot feel unfair. That doesn't work.
It may be unfair that this can lead to a more dispassionate judge.
Does this help?
=^^=
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Thank you for all of your replies. 
PBF
P.S Reefannie, you post did help. I thought the last part was incomplete a
PBF
P.S Reefannie, you post did help. I thought the last part was incomplete a
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