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Mr. Tom Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

'Victim' vs 'Murdered'

Hi

Can we use the word "murdered" instead of "victim" in places like:

(is this sentence natural?)

The murdered lay all around unattended, hundreds of vultures circling above them.

Thanks,

Tom
  

Top answer

Yes. This is fine.

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Yes. This is fine.
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Thanks, Avangi, but what's more natural?

The victims lay all around...

The murdered lay all around...

Tom
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"Victims" is more natural and relaxed.
"Murdered" is more expressive, imaginative, and dramatic.
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Hi,



No doubt your context makes the meaning clear, but nevertheless you might note that 'victim' is a pretty general kind of word. By itself, it certainly dosn't convey the meaning that a person is dead or murdered.



The phrase 'murder victim' is quite common.



Clive
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Thanks, Clive. I don't mean to disparage that point of view. I understand we need to advise learners about which expressions are the most common. It just saddens me to see that sometimes the advice that a usage is uncommon is taken as a suggestion that it not be used.


Sorry, I think I mixed this up with the popped eyeball thread. (I'll keep an eye you for ya!) [H]

Th

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