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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
very short passage for Year 2 students
A very short passage meant for Year 2 students. Please edit it for me. Any suggestions to improve the passage are welcome. Thanks in advance.
Lily and Jill were walking home together after school. They were neighbours.
The sky was very dark. Soon it began to rain heavily. They ran to the bus stop to take shelter there. Then they waited and waited till the rain stopped. After about an hour when the rain had stopped, they walked home together.
Soon they reached Lily’s house and they said goodbye to each other
Lily and Jill were walking home together after school. They were neighbours.
The sky was very dark. Soon it began to rain heavily. They ran to the bus stop to take shelter there. Then they waited and waited till the rain stopped. After about an hour when the rain had stopped, they walked home together.
Soon they reached Lily’s house and they said goodbye to each other
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